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Fanfic100 Claim - Oishi Shuichiro - Breaking 
12th-Oct-2007 08:17 pm
PoT: thoughtful
Story Title: Breaking
Chapter Title: High School: It Can't Go On
Fandom: Prince of Tennis - Oishi Shuichiro
Characters: Oishi, Oshitari
Word Count: 199
Date Finished: 10/12/2007
Rating: PG
Chapter: 19/100
Prompt: Earth
Summary: Oishi breaks off his relationship with Oshitari

Master Post


Oishi was sitting on the grass finger tracing idle patters in the earth next to him. Yuushi was next to him, silent in the wake of Oishi’s bombshell. There wasn’t much to say, the reason given made perfect sense. Oishi started to stand, to leave the shelter of the tree to run home in the rain, but a slightly trembling hand on his elbow stopped him. He looked over his shoulder, surprised.

“The rain’s almost over. Wait until it ends to run off,” Oshitari said softly. “We’ll call it quits between us then.”

Oishi shook his head as the straightened. “It can’t go on, Yuushi. I’m not the love of your life and I’d rather end this before it hurts us anymore,” he said softly. Oishi pulled away from the soft grip on his elbow and started running, letting the rain wash over his body. He loved being out in the rain and wondering if it would ever purify him like it did everything around him. It couldn’t, but it was nice to believe that maybe one day the rain would take away all of his inadequacies and make him someone that deserved to be loved like Yuushi could.
Comments 
13th-Oct-2007 01:03 am (UTC)
Awww, OISHI! And YUUSHI! *cuddles them both*

Yeah. Coherency, thy name is NOT Liz. But still. Excellent!
13th-Oct-2007 01:13 am (UTC)
*giggles* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!
13th-Oct-2007 07:47 pm (UTC)
Still heartbreaking. Oh, so sad!

Um. Does Yuushi find someone? I hope?
13th-Oct-2007 10:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

He does... eventually.... I'll stick in a reference to it in the very last chapter. Or maybe I already did. I forget...
13th-Oct-2007 11:12 pm (UTC)
Well, if he did, then I'm happy, whether the reference is there or not. ^_~
13th-Oct-2007 11:17 pm (UTC)
He does. He gets his happily ever after too. I have no idea who it's with, though...
13th-Oct-2007 11:24 pm (UTC)
That can be a side story, later. ^_^
14th-Oct-2007 12:09 am (UTC)
I told Kathy I'd develop the YuushixOishi relationship more eventually.
14th-Oct-2007 01:47 am (UTC)
I can't wait to read that -

What about the Yuushi/whoever relationship?
14th-Oct-2007 02:16 am (UTC)
I'd have to figure out who "whoever" is before I could write it.
14th-Oct-2007 02:23 am (UTC)
Oh. Well, yes. That would help.
14th-Oct-2007 02:28 am (UTC)
Generally speaking.
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